Tuesday, September 30, 2008

Winner at a losing game..


Have you ever loved someone who doesnt feel the same,
trying to make them care for you, it feels like catching the rain.
Have u ever treated someone as your heartbeat,
and felt as a pebble at there feet..

Have you ever given your best and still didnt get the love,
and still felt that it was you only who didnt give enough.
Have you ever cared for someone so much, that you wished you would die on there turn,
and still got slighted and it made your heart burn..

Have you ever sustained a feeling so intense,
when for them, it just meant nonsense,
have u ever lost someone, and just had yourself to blame,
I have, and I am a winner at this losing game..

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hi PJ
A great work.........
can truly understand your feelings...passing through same situation....not truly identical to yours ....but your last two lines..
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have u ever lost someone, and just had yourself to blame,
I have, and I am a winner at this losing game..
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suit me........
Hope that my following lines will reveal my identiy....



Aj vi raatan nu sohn toh pehla hauke bhardan haan.....
School de jad oh din yaad kardan haan...
Iko bench teh main udhe naal baithiya karda si....
Has has ke maasomiyat naal udhe naal gallan karda si.....
Udon tah kuch samajh nahin si ke pyar ki hunda hai....
Par hun 7 saal baad unhu takan nu dil karda hain....
Kasoor uda vi nahin yaaro, unhu bewafa nahi keh sakda....
Par yaaron ki kra main apne dil nu hun samjah vi nahin sakda......
Kyi vaar sochda haan ke ki oh hune vi mainu yaad kardi hoyegi....
Apne uljhe hoye waqt toh 2 pal mere layi vi kadhdi hoyegi....
Je dosto kisi tarah pata lag jaye ke oh mainu vi yaad kardi hain....
Mere vichode vich oh vi hanju kadhdi hain....
Sara jag chad ke main udhe kol bhaj jawa....
khud rahnja, teh unhu apni heer bana lawa....
Je yaaron yeh pyar sirf ik tarfa hi hain.... Tah ranjha jogi ban ke apni zindagi kad lawanga main....
Apna saya vi main uste nahin pahen dewanga....
Door di tak ke unhu main apna waqt guzar leya karanga.....
Ki karaan yaaron murr ke hun pyar nahi hosakda.....
Tasveer jehri udi dil vich wassi hain us nu koi mita nahin sakda....
Hun tah sirf rab hi eh tasveer mitayega...
Oh vi udon jad oh mainu apne kol bulayega....
Jeonde ji tah rab vi eh karnama nahin kar sakda....
Mainu meri ______ toh juda nahin kar sakda....
Ude pyar vich eh janam ki lakhan janam vaar deya....
Unhu kush karan layi chahe apne aap nu suli chdaah deya....
Oh ik vaar mere wal has ke tah dekhe....Usdi har ik muskan piche main apna ang ang katwa diya....
Ude layi mera pyar dino din wadhi janda hain....
Par udah eh pyar meri jaan vi kadi janda hain....
Us toh juda ho ke nahin reha janda doston...
Nikal jaani hain ik din mere pind toh eh jaan doston....
Ik gal apne veer di palle ban laina....
Viah toh pehla kisi naal sacha pyar na karna.....
Sacha pyaar tuhanu chain naal jeen nahi dewega....
Mere wango tuhade cho vi koi gallian vich awara ghumda milega...awara ghumda milega...awara ghunda milega....

Anonymous said...

Hi bro
Eagerly waiting for your new art..................

Till then this one specially for you bro..............
Hope you will understand.........


Rabba meri galti ki si, kyun nahi mili mainu wafa....
Pyar dita si jinhu be-antaan da, oh hi ho gayi bewafa....
Rabba meri galti ki si, kyun sunni hunn meriaan akhaan....
Enhaan naal tah karda si main din bhar us kudi naal mithiaan gallan....
Rabba meri galti ki si, kyun khaali hunn mere huthh....
Shrmaondi si oh pyar naal tadh, uhnu pakarda si enhaan naal jadh....
Rabba meri galti ki si, kyun meri zindagi ban gayi ret....
Bikhar ke reh gayi hain eh hun, koi na kar sake enhu samett....
Rabba meri galti ki si, kyun nahi mitda dilon eh pyar....
Apne kol bula leh mainu jah de de mainu mera yaar....
Rabba meri galti ki si, kyun kita main sacha pyar....
Kyun mainu bura lagda,jad unhu bura kehnde mere yaar....
Rabba udih galti ki hai, ki kar pawanga ude naal wafa....
Gharde karange thode saalaan tak jis kudi naal mera viah....
Rabba meri galti eh si, shayad apne yaar nu hi rab mann lita....
Uhde pyar vich enha pagal si, uhdeh layi tenu bulah dita....
tenu bulah dita....
tenu bulah dita....

Osmium said...

Loved it...

Osmium said...

Loved it...