Monday, September 1, 2008

Still feels good..


Look at the way I'm living without you,
you will see the pain I'm going through.
The beats of my heart chant your name,
for losing you, I have myself to blame..

You were with me wherever I stood,
thinking of those times, it still feels good.
When I was with you, I felt like home,
you showed me the world and then left me alone..

Lonley are the nights now and lonley are the days,
wherever I look I see your face.
My heart is blessed with the hurt of missing you,
it brings a smile on my face, when I think of you..

The past is gone and so have you,
I'm here all alone watching the paths we traversed together,
remembering the silent talks we had, and the sight of each other which made us glad.
You made everything clear, but it still seems a fuzz,
missing you still feels so good, it really does..

3 comments:

Tarni said...

Awesome wording and emotions on the paper...
Things go round and round... yet only a few things left and those left overs are the best companions...
Takecare of yourself.

Rabb Rakha

Butterfly said...

this is awesome poem..,,really touching!

Anonymous said...

These wordings truly depict your emotions bro......
Nice going but remain focussed...........Right now you might know who I am......
Will always pray for your happy love life and..............

For people like us......


Tutte dil di dastan hai eh doston,bhul ke vi is te hass na pena....
Kyunki sehi hai jisne eh peerrh doston,usne kal tak is duniya vich nahi rehna....
Eh ik hudd beeti doston, eh kambakht vichode di paidaish hai....
Khut khut ke jeen naalon maar diyaan is aks nu, eh meri ik dilli khwaish hain...
Bachpan da eh pyaar si doston, jehra kadi dilon bahar nahi kadeya....
Pyar da matlab udon pata nahin si, islye shayad khud vi eh jaan na sakeya....
7 saal beet gaye teh main jawan hoyeya, par doston jawani de naal naal mera eh pyaar hor vi jawan hoyeya....
Aidhar uhdar bhatakda main,apne pyaar nu labhda firda haan....
Bhave koi umeed nahin udhe milan di,par ranjha,punnu teh mirza banaya nadhda haan....
Udeh bachpan di tasveer hai dil vich, udeh naal hi gallaan karda haan....
Hun kiwe dikhdi howegi oh, bas hamesha ehi sochda rehnda haan....
Kissi hor kudi wal main nahi takda, shayad mainu eh paap hai lagda....
Jithe vi main takda haan,mainu sirf apna hi humsafar dikhda....
Eh ik sachaa pyar hai doston, is nu dilon kadheya nahin ja sakda....
Dil cheer ke tah dekhon mera, dooor dungaian tak ______ da hi pyar hai vasda....
Main tah ikelle rehn toh darrda, sham diyan tanhaiyan toh muh ferda haan....
Raat de supneya vich vi main, sirf apna hi pyaar nu chehda haan....
Tang a geya haan doston, is roz de tamashe toh..
Ghardian teh yaaran murre choothe hasnan, teh ikele hon te pena roh...
Kar leya main faisla doston, khatam karanga main eh khel....
Maar dawanga khud nu, pyaar de imtihaan ho gya main fail....
Sisak sisak ke ron naalu main is peerrh toh azaad ho jawanga....
Ki pata ke rab de sache pyar de granth vich mera vi pyaar amar ho jawega....amar ho jawega....amar ho jawega